Friday, 24 July 2020

the eye of the Bridge

 Kia Ora, I made a writing piece, the subject is Thriller. Hope you like it!
What was the most thrilling moment in your life?
Cautiously, Peggy tramped through the forest.  She lost her home, she tried to find a new home but she felt  like someone was treading after her. When she came across a river she thought her home was nearby but the river stopped. Peggy shuffled back and so an eye popped up. She was horrified, the eye winked at her a couple of times and it was like it was speaking to her in another language that she could not understand. So she stairway “thump thump thump” Peggy trudged upon the tall and steep hill she slipped and fell into the eyeball that lead to the end sign.
THE ENDGirl Falling without background by AudreyJaynne on DeviantArt
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 August 2020 at 10:52

    Hi my name and i am i room 7 and i like your post
    blog you later

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  2. Anonymous2 December 2020 at 09:16

    Hi J'varn thanks for you comment
    blog you later

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  3. Anonymous2 December 2020 at 09:18

    Hi Mads!
    I really like your story and I'm happy I helped you. I think it's funny that you made a picture of Peggy falling next to the End sign! 😂
    What's the best story you made about and what is its name?
    Blog you later,
    Maia 😃😎

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  4. Anonymous2 December 2020 at 09:24

    Hi Maia thanks for your comment
    the best story I made is probably about our school
    blog you later

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