Kia ora madi, I love your children's book Zoey's Big Adventure. The pictures really match up well with what is happening in the story. I really like page 4 of your story as it tells the reader what Zoey did on Saturn for fun. Perhaps you could add what Zoey did for fun on Mars too. Perhaps she could explore some of the volcanoes. When I move my mouse cursor over the slide it changes to look like a shooting star or meteorite - a great touch!
Hello Madi! I really like your story about Zoey. It sounds fun to go to those different types of planets! I like that your story is nice and short too! Also the pictures are cool! Why did you decide to do it about Zoey's big adventure? Stay safe! Emma
Kia Ora, Madi, I think you have the beginnings of a series of further adventures for Zoey, what happened when she went to Jupiter for example. This kind of looks like a comic book as well.
Hi Madi! I really like your story! I think Zoey looks very cute. Yes I have, I actually STARTED a lot, then don't finish them because I have other ideas that might not really click in with the story. What was your favourite part of writing this book? Stay safe!
Hi Maia Thanks for your comment I bet your ideas are great maybe you could add some of your ideas on another books I liked writing the fished bit of the book what is your favourite book you have whiten??? Blog you later, Madi
Kia Ora Madi, I liked your story, Zoey was a good charcter and was fun! Yes, i have made books before and I am working on one now! I am using book creator make it (its on my blog!). What do you enjoy about making books? Stay safe!
Hi Marcella Thanks for your comment I bet your book its really good I like making every thing about it but I really like writing the book do you like making books??? Blog you later
Kia ora madi, I love your children's book Zoey's Big Adventure. The pictures really match up well with what is happening in the story. I really like page 4 of your story as it tells the reader what Zoey did on Saturn for fun. Perhaps you could add what Zoey did for fun on Mars too. Perhaps she could explore some of the volcanoes. When I move my mouse cursor over the slide it changes to look like a shooting star or meteorite - a great touch!
ReplyDeleteHello Madi!
ReplyDeleteI really like your story about Zoey. It sounds fun to go to those different types of planets! I like that your story is nice and short too! Also the pictures are cool!
Why did you decide to do it about Zoey's big adventure?
Stay safe!
Emma
Kia Ora, Madi, I think you have the beginnings of a series of further adventures for Zoey, what happened when she went to Jupiter for example. This kind of looks like a comic book as well.
ReplyDeleteHello Mr P
DeleteThanks for your comment
I don't really know what she did
have you got any ideas for Zoey to go to Jupiter
Blog you later,
Madi
Hi Madi!
ReplyDeleteI really like your story! I think Zoey looks very cute. Yes I have, I actually STARTED a lot, then don't finish them because I have other ideas that might not really click in with the story.
What was your favourite part of writing this book?
Stay safe!
Hi Maia
DeleteThanks for your comment
I bet your ideas are great maybe you could add some of your ideas on another books
I liked writing the fished bit of the book
what is your favourite book you have whiten???
Blog you later,
Madi
Kia Ora Madi,
ReplyDeleteI liked your story, Zoey was a good charcter and was fun!
Yes, i have made books before and I am working on one now!
I am using book creator make it (its on my blog!).
What do you enjoy about making books?
Stay safe!
Hi Marcella
DeleteThanks for your comment
I bet your book its really good
I like making every thing about it but I really like writing the book
do you like making books???
Blog you later